Cinderella Story .. Kinda ?

Its supposed to be at the end sorry guys./:

Witch and dauqhterr.

There once was a young girl about 13 years old she lost her Mother in a car accident, then when she was 14 she lost her dad because of drug abuse. So she had to qet a foster home. A pernament one. So she did the mother had 3 girls and 1 boy the boy was always hitting on her. All her new mom (A.k.a  Zelda) made her do was chores and if cinderella didn't do them a certain way then she'd smack her. But Cinderella did all her chores one day after school she met this boy named Zeke in Chemestry they started talking a few months then they were dating so one day Cinderelle snook out to see Zeke they ended doing much more then she planned. MUCH MUCH more. They made love, but that love was real. She is now 16 and pregnant with a little girl they named her BrookelleRenee and she has no way to support the baby so she thought i have to get a job and an apartment. So thats what she did, one night her and Zeke went on a date and left the baby with a babysitter named Jessica but that night there was a break in the baby didn't get hurt but Jessica did the robber tried to shoot the baby cause it wouldn't stop crying so Jessica jumped in front of the baby so she wouln't get shot and the robber ran. Jessica isn't dead but she is knocked out. But one day Cinderella was bored and wondered off into the woods and ran into a witch . The witch said 'OhMy!, You are a beautiful little thing arent you?' Cinderella goes 'Hello Ma'am im just wondering around do you happen to know where I can find a strawberry bush?' The witch replies' No, No I don't I am truely sorry. You look quite familiar. Do I know you from somewhere?' Cinderella replies ' Uhm no I do not think so. ' The witch said 'Ohh yes ! I remember you !, Cinderella is it really you? Oh it is ! I knew you were alivee !' Cinderella  ' Who are you again?  ' I am your mother.I cant believe its you I thought i lost you in that fire I went to go get help and by the time i got back everything way gone.! Oh Cinderella, darling i am soo sorry. I've missed you don't know how much.' Cinderella was getting her memory back she replied, 'Mom is that really you? She burst out into tears. 'Mom i've missed you dearly ! I have a daughter and a boyfriend , Zeke and BrookelleRenee. OhNoNoNo, This won't do the witch replied.' What are you talking about mother? Zeke he is evil he's trying to take your powers away we must run Hurry ! Go to your house and get BrookelleRenee before he drains her powers, here take my broomstick ! ' Mother Wait ! How will I know how to get back. 'You've always known ! you know how to get back home ! Cinderella raced home to get BrookelleRenee so she ran inside grabbed Brookelle and ran outside and ridden back home. Ohh Wonderful, My Beautiful grandaughter, Cinderella ended up staying with her mother one day never to see Zeke again. One day she was walking in the Candy Kingdom and ran into a boy Cinderella was now 23 which means Brookelle was 7 years old. 'Oh Hello.' Cinderella said to the kind man, He said 'Hello. How are you on this kind, lovely, beautiful day?' Oh Hehe I am doing just fine. Then She Asked him what his name was.' He replied 'Zeke. You Remember Me. You Know Your Daughters Father ..